fr3nzy
Username & Title - 3/5
fr3nzy. I'm taking it for frenzy. Could be the emotion you were feeling when you started the diary. I don't know, because you never tell me. I don't see how it fits you, but it's a name and it works, I suppose. Your title is cute, a little bland, but still cute.
Layout - 25/30
Made by Francey. It's cute. Again, kind of bland, but still cute. The colors work nicely together. I kind of like it.
Content - 30/45
The first thing I always do is look at the cast page, if one is present. The first thing I did today was look at yours. You have A LOT of people on your cast page and my guess is that you don't talk about half of them. We shall see. The next thing I read was your "profile" which is actually an all-about-me entry. I was seven when you were born, and that makes me feel old. Moving on.
I started on your May entries. You have entries that date back to 2002! I could read them, but I'm not going to. Mostly to save time and mostly because you were probably a different person back then. It might be interesting to see the progression of that person in your writing, but for now, we're saving time. In the first few May entries, you're going through fairly typical teenage drama. I remember getting caught up in those feelings when I was your age, and I have to say that you verbalize it very well. I like the way you think about things. I like how you try to put yourself in someone else's shoes or imagine what has happened to them, happening to you. I like that you don't pass judgement on people, but that you try to understand instead.
Well, I read everything May through September. You worry about a lot of trivial high school things that I don't particularly care about, but you verbalize them nicely. You interject feelings and thoughts and that's what stops me from calling your entries day logging.
Links - 5/5
Our link is there. Wonderful!
Extras - 5/5
You have a lot of extra links that lead off site. Which, is why they're classified as extras. They are extra things for us to look at.
Stalkability - 1/5
You have JUST a tag board. That's really kind of pathetic.
Will We Return - 5/5
As I said, it might be interesting to watch the progression of your writing. You've had your diary since 2002 and it is now three years later. You're bound to be a totally different person and seeing that transformation might be cool. I might return.
We Totally Heart You! 10/15
I have to give you props. Your grammar is spot on and for being only fifteen, you have an amazing ability to look outside the box. You think of yourself as judgemental, but my friend, you are not. You have the ability to put yourself in someone else's shoes and think of yourself as being in their position. Your writing is beautiful and although I found myself uninterested in the high school drama, most of the time, I kept on reading and that was due in part to your writing style. Keep up the good work.
Total: 84
Reviewed by: Blondie
Current Mood of the Reviewer: Blah.